Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable Corrected 1: The Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves; it was believed to be unsinkable.
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land Corrected 2: Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we need to finish reading Eliot's long poem,The Waste.
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly Corrected 1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to theAtlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library Corrected 2: "I am very eager French novelThe Plague," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations Corrected 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Corrected 2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music. and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet Corrected Sentence 1: I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope that was the largest I had ever seen
Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing Corrected Sentence 2: Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel alright now, Walter, or do you not want to go skiing?"
DOL 33
Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library Corrected Sentence 1: When are these books due, Hans" should I bring them to the library?
Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified Corrected Sentence 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
DOL 34
Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain Corrected Sentence 1: Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier Corrected Sentence 2: While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.
DOL 35
Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft Corrected Sentence 1: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's draft.
Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming Corrected Sentence 2: My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana and camping in Wyoming.
DOL 36
Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated Corrected Sentence 1: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated.
Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think Corrected Sentence 2: The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for my mom and me.
DOL 37
Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)
ms paula jeffers
campton paper company
18376 river drive
minneaplois mn
dear ms jeffers
Corrected Sentence 1:
Ms. Paula Jeffers
Campton Paper Company
18376 River Drive
Minneapolis, Mn
Dear Ms. Jeffers,
DOL 38
Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy
Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew
DOL 39
Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner
Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29
DOL 40
Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico
Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry
DOL 41
Sentence 1: park rangers who words in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth
Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years later bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs
DOL 42 (G still needs)
Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination
Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests
DOL 43 (D still needs)
Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club
Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found
DOL 44
Sentence 1: neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good
Sentence 2: mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked
Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Corrected 1: The Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves; it was believed to be unsinkable.
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
Corrected 2: Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we need to finish reading Eliot's long poem, The Waste.
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Corrected 1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
Corrected 2: "I am very eager French novel The Plague," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1: everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
Corrected 1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2: having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
Corrected 2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music. and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1: i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet
Corrected Sentence 1: I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope that was the largest I had ever seen
Sentence 2: ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
Corrected Sentence 2: Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel alright now, Walter, or do you not want to go skiing?"
DOL 33
Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
Corrected Sentence 1: When are these books due, Hans" should I bring them to the library?
Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
Corrected Sentence 2: After the Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
DOL 34
Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain
Corrected Sentence 1: Much depends on whether you're affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier
Corrected Sentence 2: While half the class uses the Internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian Magazines that are different from the ones we used earlier.
DOL 35
Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft
Corrected Sentence 1: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because no one had a copy of Marie's draft.
Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming
Corrected Sentence 2: My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, hiking in Montana and camping in Wyoming.
DOL 36
Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated
Corrected Sentence 1: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal, stated.
Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think
Corrected Sentence 2: The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for my mom and me.
DOL 37
Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)
ms paula jeffers
campton paper company
18376 river drive
minneaplois mn
dear ms jeffers
Corrected Sentence 1:
Ms. Paula Jeffers
Campton Paper Company
18376 River Drive
Minneapolis, Mn
Dear Ms. Jeffers,
DOL 38
Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy
Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew
DOL 39
Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner
Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29
DOL 40
Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico
Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry
DOL 41
Sentence 1: park rangers who words in large forests periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth
Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years later bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs
DOL 42 (G still needs)
Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination
Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests
DOL 43 (D still needs)
Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club
Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found
DOL 44
Sentence 1: neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good
Sentence 2: mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked